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Once I had a reason
A smile ear to ear
Now Im only trying
My best to hide the tears.
Heart is bleeding outward
And face can't hid the pain
Confusion is it's ally
Run circles in my brain
Putrid death is coming
I feel it in my bones
Blinded by devotion
I dont know where to go
I used to know a feeling
I used to understand
Lost is all my feeling
My will to comprehend..
What the hell am I doing?
A smile ear to ear
Now Im only trying
My best to hide the tears.
Heart is bleeding outward
And face can't hid the pain
Confusion is it's ally
Run circles in my brain
Putrid death is coming
I feel it in my bones
Blinded by devotion
I dont know where to go
I used to know a feeling
I used to understand
Lost is all my feeling
My will to comprehend..
What the hell am I doing?
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I like this one a lot as well. I know a lot of your stuff is the sort of depressed, sad, or angry stuff, and I honestly think that that genre speaks volumes more than the mushy-heart-felt stuff, I really do. And I also believe that everything you write, and every word in this poem is relatable. I can feel the pain and depression that this is depicting, and I couldn't have put it a better way. I struggle very much with writing the darker side of things, because honestly those emotions are probably the strongest emotions there are, and it's VERY hard to depict them accurately. That being said, I have no idea how you do this. I ALWAYS feel you depicted the feelings flawlessly, and I just wish I could do the same 